I don't know what to say, what with this being my first submission... Umm... Enjoy...?
Oh, wait, first, let me tell you that this is my first fan character for the Sonic the Hedgehog series, created just today. His name is Night the Raven. I made him because I wanted to know what my Sonic character would be. So.... I hope you like him. I drew it meself
So... Enjoy!
Comment, rate.... gimmie feedback on 'im. XD
Biography:
Name: Night the raven Nicknames: Black feather Age: 17 Species: Raven Gender: male Height: 3'1'' Weight: 60 lbs IQ: 117 Marital Status: single DOB: 03/04 Birth Place: Iron wood forest Residence: White wood forest Occupation: none Social Class: Loner Economic Class: Lower class Alignment: Neutral Top Speed: High speed runner (Only while flying at high velocity, other then that he normally flies at Above average runner) his speed while running is about an average runner. Basic Stats: lowest = 1, highest =10 (added numbers [for gifted runners only] cannot exceed 40) Agility - 7 Speed - 9(in flight at HV,7 [normal fly speed]), runing about a 5 Strength - 3 Defense - 4 Evasiveness - 7 (flying),5 or so while not. Dexterity - 5 give or take. Intelligence - 6 Skill -6 give or take depending on if hes flying.
Special Attacks:Feather blast (summons an black orb about 4-5 inch that shoots razor sharp feathers from it) Void orb (gathers shadows from every cravice and corner to suround the enimies and forces there mind to face their worst fears) Abilities & Aptitude: Umbrakinetic and flight Hobbies & Talents: Flying, exploring, likes to sit in the woods and watch the day go by. Weaknesses: These do no include weaknesses already mention in Basic Stats: His curiousity can sometimes get the best of him. When it comes to land battles he must rely on his powers. While his wings may give his air control they can't realy provide much of an advantage while on the ground, for he must use his powers to grab,Write,etc... Personal facts Friends: 0 Rivals: 0 Enemies: 0 Known relatives: 1 (diseast) Likes/Favorite activities: love flying, the feel of the wind rushing around him brisling his feathers as he flys. Sit at the park and watch happy couples as they walk by. likes a fresh worm after a rainy day, yum! Read a book, if he can, under the canopy of a forest were birds sing frog croak and the trees flourish. Charishes a good bath in a lake or river. Dislikes/Least favorite activities: politics, documents, the heat, dry places, un-natural looking things (such as buildings and cities), loud places, his ability void orb. Gourmet of choice: fresh worms Beverages of choice: water Favorite color(s): Violet Physical Appearance Nights feather coloring is mainly black, but has small grayish highlights in his wings and body. He has a medium sized Dark grey (almsot black) beak. His eyes are a piercing violet, which glow a Sharp purple when using his powers. Night never realy had much of a tail aside from a few short feathers. Attire: nothing much aside from his shoes Items & Weapons: none Themesong: none yet. Backstory:
His name wasn't always Night the raven you know? Nope, there was a time when he was called Solis the raven. That was a time before he founded his powers. How did he get them you say? Well that is an interesting little story, it went a little something like this...
Solis lived in a small town, nothing to big but not small. the town was surounded by deep thick forest that seemed endless when one would go exploring. His house was nothing special by any means, just a simple little cottage carved out of a rather large tree on the outskirts of the town. There he was born and raised by his mother Emilia she was a tall noble looking raven, with a small beak and sleek black feathers, And his father Kroth, he was a rather built bird with wings as wide as he was tall, his feathers were a stark black with streeks of Light gray. Although, Solis's father left when he was realy younge, barely even a year old.When Solis grew up, no matter how hard he might try to remember his father, he couldn't. Naturaly his mother had always been there for him, and helped him grow up.
It was the happiest time of his life when he was little, always when he would come home from school his mom would be there with some bread as a after school snack for him to nibble on. He was always good at anything he put his mind to, hardly ever giving in until he mastered it, Also having a nack for solving object puzzles. He did however lack in all his P.E. classes because instead of taking after his mother's hands he took after his father and was given wings. So when ever he could he would use them to fly into the air going faster and faster until he couldn't go anymore then keep going. These were truly his most happiest moments in time, it was only when he hit 13 and was attending middle school that problems started to ensue.
First it was his mind, always drifting off into dreams of air brushing against his ruffled feathers as he flew through the air with the crisp smell of morning filling his nostrals. Until one day as he was walking home from a long day at school, a couple of kids that he saw now and then hanging out at a table in the back of the lunch room at school, aproached him. One was a tall and well built wolf, which stood as if the pack leader, and the two at his sides were both, for what apeared to be, twin black cats. Not knowing their intension Solis said "Hi, how are you guys doing?". However their reply wasn't verbal. They punched and kicked at him as Night desperately tried in vain the curl into a ball in hope of some defense against the hard hitting bullies. After they were done Nights strength seem sapped from his body and fell unconsious, only to awaken in a hospital with his mom's cheery face above him. They sat and talked for hours until a nurse said it was time to go. He was released that evening to go home and get some rest.
Each day that passed Solis looked at that table in the back of the lunch room for the bullies, they were never there. Eventually he forgot all about it and concentrated on getting his homework and grades back up to par. This continued for a couple of months, getting up for school and coming home to do his homework and eat dinner. All was fine, all was peaceful Solis even took up a an extra class for reading.
One glooming morning, as the clouds hung deeply in the sky, rain pounding down on the ground outside as Solis got ready for school.With a peck from his mom he was off walking to school rather then flying, for it was to cold and rainy for flight. As Solis turned the corner from his house and into the alley way that provided a short cut to school. He saw something, Someting that he hadn't seen in a long time. It was the bullies, they were taunting a short and rather scrony little bird that apeared that she could only be in the 5th grade.
Acting fast Solis was off running at the bullies in hope that he wouldn't be to late for them to start their beating on the little thing. Before he even got close one of the twin cats turned around and saw Solis's charge. As quick as the weasel that he was, he turned and warned his party. Solis stoped as all the bullies turned on him and started to charge toward him instead of persueing the small she-bird, which took the oppertunity to run away, with a twinkle of meaningless pleasure in their eyes as they ran toward their newly found victim.
There wasn't much Solis could do aside from trying hopelessly to block a few punches and throw in some smacks of his own every now and then. Soon he was overwhelmed and found himself once again curled in a ball to hopefully provide some defense as the beating consumed him. To His suprise the beating didn't hurt as bad as it had when they first swung a punch toward him.
At the peak of the beating lost in the pain, Emilia Night's mother walked around the corner on her way to get some groceries before the storm got to bad that it would be impossable to get to the store. A wave of horror slamed into her as she saw the bullies pounding away on some poor soul, which tripled as she realized that it was her own son!
She shrieked a loud test of warning that the bullies heard all to well. Heads snaped upon Emilia fear in their eyes as they were finaly caught in their own injustice. The wolf however recoiled from his fear with a smile to his face he stood up, pointed a finger toward her and ordered for his companions to attack. In protest of fear the twin cats looked at their leader in fear, but the wolfs face only intensified and his companions complied fearing less for what might happen and more for what would happen if they didn't attack. Emilia was awstruck at the bullies respawns. Nothing she could do for her son and not wanting to leave him, she could only take the blows that were to come.
Solis uncurled from his defensive position on the ground and saw the raw horror as the bullies aproached the only one he had ever known, the only one that he had ever cared for and loved. A fire lite inside of him, a fire that lingered inside of him for so long only now to be unleashed. Rage mounting inside Solis stood up in defiance against the pestering bullies. His eyes glew a bright purple as the bullies slowly realized that he was back up. The pack leader and his companions stared in fear as the shadows around them slowly started to move. Kreeping out of every little crack and fence in the alleyway, slowly surrounding them as they were locked in fear as they stared into Solis's hate filled eye's.
Unable to look away, the shadows became solid around the bullies and Solis's mother as he gave into his rage and fear. A huge globe of darkness consumed them swirling around and around in the spherical vortex that was Solis's rage. Screams enued from the globe as the bullies were being mentaly slamed with all of the things that they had feared, everything that they hated, everything that made them who they were. Emilia laying there on the ground as her last memory faded from her mind and she sliped into complete darkness not able to say anything, unable to sooth the rage that was in her son. All she sould do was watch as Solis claimed the minds of those that had caused him so much pain and anger.
Solis at last came to understand what he had done, that his most loved mother was in the sphere that he created. As quickly as it had come the swirling vortex was gone, only to reveal four corrupted bodies. Unable to believe what had happened he jumped into the sky and flew as fast as he could to get help. Not to far off he spoted the the red cross infront of the rained down hospital and flew harder then he had ever flown before.
Still consumed with fear for what might happen to his mother Solis faultered as he tried to land, only to fall tumbling to the ground breaking his right wing. Wincing in pain at the broken wing he stood and stumbled into the hospital were the staff on boerd rushed to his aid only to be denied by a flick of a wing. Moments later sirens sounded, moments later four medical carts rolled through the door. Solis, spotting his mother ran toward her only to be whisked away by a couple of nurses and docter grabing at him from behind and putting him in a wheel chair to be rushed to a back room to examine his wing.
Hours passed as Solis waited with his newly bandaged wing, outside his mother's rooms for the docter to tell him it was ok to come in.
Moments passed in anticipating wait until the docter came through the door inviting him in. Solis got up ignoring the wave of pain that coiled up his arm as he stood, and walked slowly into the room in fear. The life meter bleeped as he walked up to the bed were she layed still and silent. Mouth dry barely forming words, numbed by what he was seeing. When finaly she turned her head in a grogy slurred voice she said " My son, the apple of my eye, my only salvation in this world, I love you s..." the life metter bleeped heavily as pain flooded through her body.
The life meters noises grew less and less as he stood there not knowing what to say or do. Tears started to brim Solis's eyes as his mother smiled at him and said " Do not let it consume y....". The machine went quiet as he watch his own mother slip from the world. A hand touch his shoulder as a nurse lead him out of the room.
Months later Solis was sitting on a bench at the park watching as couples pass by, giving light to his darkness as they so happily fooled with each other. That day he was placed in an orfinage under the name "Night the raven".
ravens (or any birds) don't have hair silly, they have feathers. XD and yes i know i like it a lot better to thats why in kind of combining both concepts of him so the has those feathers but still has some things from the other concept.
fethers hair what ever :3 but he has cool fethers on his head then xD but u realy need to get ur final conset together cuzzz his legs and wings keep changeing the most
not bad fur your first charrieX3 i've made maybe twenty but i honestly dont have a clue because i dont keep count i just create but i'm surprised at all the detais you got out of this(hasn't even done that for my own charrie-_-